Still, as I was writing this I came up with my title and liked it a bit better…but either would work well in my opinion.
I might include some of it in a later email but if it’s really important I would just add it to my profile.
Likewise, I wouldn’t use the first email to describe your impression of whomever you’re contacting.
He was disappointed with the number of responses he was receiving (although I think it’s important to keep in mind there are many reasons you may not get responses, not just how you write your email) As I talk about in my guide, I don’t believe anyone has the dating/realtionships thing fully figured out.
Some of us have more experience or better insight than others but at the end of the day we’re all just making our best guesses.
As with the earlier emails, I felt this email had too much of him describing himself and describing what he saw in her.